Sometimes when students were studied far away home, they have to live in the dormitory. I have lived in the dormitory since senior high school. There are so many differences between living home and in the dormitory. I think the main difference are privacy and convenient.
The dormitory is a public place, so you do not have much privacy here. You have to share space with your roommate, so you have to keep your own place clean and organized every day. It is very difficult to live with a roommate who has bad habit. For example, I used to live with a person who smokes inside the house. It is always a bad small around the whole place. Live in the dormitory, you can not do anything you want just like you were at home. Listening to music loudly or walking around naked is not allowed in the dormitory.
Living at home is much more convenient than living in the dormitory. You have to wash your clothes every two or three days when you living in the dormitory. Sometime when I was too busy and I forgot to wash my clothes. I have to wear dirty clothes to school. Getting something to eat is another thing you have to care about when you living outside. The restaurant inside the school is cheap and delicious. But the food there is always the same. It will make you feel gross when you keep eating the same food.
Students who never live outside might think that living in the dormitory have more freedom because their parents are not here. For me, living at home is much better than living in the dormitory. You have more privacy, convenient, and most important, you can see your family every time.

3 則留言:
只能說每個人的家都不太一樣就是了,我雖然住家裡,不過有三個姊姊一起住,我不能開音樂太大聲,也不能光著身體到處跑,每天家裡的食物都差不多,不過可以天天見到家人倒是真的
It's enjoyed to read your paragraph.
Your topic sentence is clear and your examples are good and funny. I mean "the smoke smell" and "walking around naked" are well-spoken, and these parts are the most I enjoyed. It's really interesting!
It is good that you rewrite your topic sentence on your conclusion.
There is one suggestion for you about you said "the most important is you can see your family every time," maybe you can write one or two more sentences about how you love your family or how good or important to be with your family then it will be more matched.
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